Post by thetruth on Dec 16, 2008 1:55:55 GMT -5
Ok this one here is for my cretive writing portfolio. Just a little guy explaining a bit about this semester. Comment and ask questions please.
"Cozy on the couch"
OK let’s get something straight
I love my bed
I really do
But I have lost my bed and I can’t find her
I miss her warm embrace
the way she warms me up
Spurns the scary world and Ships me off to dream land
More than a resting place for the body
But the mind too
Something has stolen her soul
No longer does she pull me in
kiss me goodnight
Cold and restless night
Tossing with a slight case of turning
Until I find my love I sleep with the couch
Sure I sound sleazy
she is easy
Every day she cycles through people
Taking their change in exchange for a ride
But I cannot resist her soporific effect
Slipping me roofie I fall into her world
She is gentle but not quite comfortable
This is a temporary hook up and not a long term match
I can’t see this lasting
But for now I must
A cushy couch
My bed away from my bed
"Cozy on the couch"
OK let’s get something straight
I love my bed
I really do
But I have lost my bed and I can’t find her
I miss her warm embrace
the way she warms me up
Spurns the scary world and Ships me off to dream land
More than a resting place for the body
But the mind too
Something has stolen her soul
No longer does she pull me in
kiss me goodnight
Cold and restless night
Tossing with a slight case of turning
Until I find my love I sleep with the couch
Sure I sound sleazy
she is easy
Every day she cycles through people
Taking their change in exchange for a ride
But I cannot resist her soporific effect
Slipping me roofie I fall into her world
She is gentle but not quite comfortable
This is a temporary hook up and not a long term match
I can’t see this lasting
But for now I must
A cushy couch
My bed away from my bed
I'll be honest, I didn't get the comparison you were making until I guess somewhere around the word "sleazy." But once I got it, I re-read it. I like it. My only suggestion is that the speaker might want to get tested when he finds his bed again. That couch sounds like a tramp. 
